Dear AE

Well Done and good choice of sound. Your piece is sort of nice and well organised. What i mean is the use of sound to match with the grafix is done very well. Some points should be remeber such i think the graphic line (the black line that you use in this piece is a little bit แข็งและทื่อตรงไปหน่อย if it make like a hand drawn would be perfect fit with the red wall, organic flower shape and also fit with the garage music. More over like i said earlier to you in the class about the rabbit, it the rabbit is jumping into screen will be perfect fit rather than come to say hi from the wall. Anyway, well done gal!

So, AO+AO+O+O+O+O+O+O+O+ where is O+'s work kub!!!!

A.Shy